In our Lesson in English, I will try to relate the different forms of sentences (compound, complex and compound-complex) to my story.
Friendship: Saves me
Once, there was a girl named Avah Xerminh Chen. She is a weird and a nerd girl without friends.When it is break time, Avah eats alone and once she sit on the chair, the group named Super B-I-T-C-H (Beautiful Individuals That Create Haters) bully her. The Leader of the group is Haley O. Parrot. She always bully Avah because of Avah's outfit and style. And one of the most important reason on why they hate Avah is because Avah doesn't want to share her answers in some quizzes and assignments to Haley.
One day, A new transferee came named Hannah Xylene Aguillar. She is a rich and a beautiful girl. The good characteristics of her is she is a friendly girl. She sits beside Avah. they are always murmuring and gossiping each other in breaktimes and lunch. but, they are serious in doing their activities in class.
And after their lunch, they see a boy whose eating by himself only. His name is Andrew Xye Cruz. He is always alone because he is to shy to be friends to others. The two girls talk with him and they became friends. When it is break, they meet each other in a pavilion and they have their bonding.
When they go into a certain pavilion, they met the Super BITCH. And Haley says " Oh my gosh, THE WEIRDOS". Then, one of their members slapped Xylene's face. "Your OVER!!!" And Xylene push the one who slapped her to the mud. And the other girl wants to kick Andrew's butt but Andrew get the girls neck and push her too on the mud. then, Haley is the only one and Haley lean and say sorry to them quickly and terribly. Then, because the Three X are kind, they immediately forgive them. After those happenings, almost all the students in their campus, even the opposite sex became friends because of them.
SO THAT'S IT!!!! TRY TO INTERPRET!
good blog
TumugonBurahinnice background and story
Good story, but do not use some un-appropriate words, but nice flow :D Good background.
TumugonBurahinGood story but you can still improve it!
TumugonBurahinThe story is good and nice background
TumugonBurahini think it is good and you can improve it..:))
TumugonBurahinIt is good but there are typographical errors in the story that you can improve :)
TumugonBurahina little bit improvement will do!
TumugonBurahinThere is some grammatical errors but you can work it out
TumugonBurahinThere is some?????? Its there are no there is....
BurahinAt the first part, the B-I-T-C-H part, I thought it was....WAAAAAAH. lol. just kidding. Hmmm. Grammatical correctness, noni. (Naks, tech wri) XD
TumugonBurahinNeed some improvement. :)
LOL.. XD, the bitch part is from wattpad, the acronym of bitch. XDDDD
BurahinI think the plot is not that clear, and btw it seems that you could have given credits to the inspiration of your story... I think I passed by a story with those characters and a slight similarity with the story plot.. :) keep it up
TumugonBurahinIt's good but don't use words that's too harsh
TumugonBurahinUmm, if your an open minded person, you can understand on why I put it on my blog. Its just a name of a group not to make on what your mind wants to say to that word. but thanks for your comment
BurahinOk why is there b*tch there? Wait that guy on the top is from 8-N I think.
TumugonBurahinAs I said, Its just a name of a group.
BurahinUmmm. People of the Philipines, The word bitch is not to make intentional things to others, but it is just a name of a group which make them more thrilling ok. So please, be openminded.. :)
TumugonBurahin~From me. Itsmexylinon